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README: clarify and fix grammar

Lucas Servén Marín 6 жил өмнө
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@@ -92,9 +92,9 @@ kubectl apply -f https://raw.githubusercontent.com/squat/kilo/master/manifests/k
 
 
 Administrators of existing clusters who do not want to swap out the existing networking solution can run Kilo in add-on mode.
 Administrators of existing clusters who do not want to swap out the existing networking solution can run Kilo in add-on mode.
 In this mode, Kilo will add advanced features to the cluster, such as VPN and multi-cluster services, while delegating CNI management and local networking to the cluster's current networking provider.
 In this mode, Kilo will add advanced features to the cluster, such as VPN and multi-cluster services, while delegating CNI management and local networking to the cluster's current networking provider.
-Currently, Kilo, supports running on top of Flannel.
+Kilo currently supports running on top of Flannel.
 
 
-For example, to run Kilo on Typhoon cluster running Flannel:
+For example, to run Kilo on a Typhoon cluster running Flannel:
 
 
 ```shell
 ```shell
 kubectl apply -f https://raw.githubusercontent.com/squat/kilo/master/manifests/kilo-typhoon-flannel.yaml
 kubectl apply -f https://raw.githubusercontent.com/squat/kilo/master/manifests/kilo-typhoon-flannel.yaml
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ kubectl apply -f https://raw.githubusercontent.com/squat/kilo/master/manifests/k
 
 
 ## VPN
 ## VPN
 
 
-Kilo enables peers outside of a Kubernetes cluster to also connect to the VPN, allowing cluster applications to securely access external services and permitting developers and support to securely debug cluster resources.
+Kilo also enables peers outside of a Kubernetes cluster to connect to the VPN, allowing cluster applications to securely access external services and permitting developers and support to securely debug cluster resources.
 In order to declare a peer, start by defining a Kilo peer resource:
 In order to declare a peer, start by defining a Kilo peer resource:
 
 
 ```shell
 ```shell
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ spec:
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-This configuration can then be applied to a local WireGuard interface, e.g. `wg0`, with the help of the `kgctl` tool:
+This configuration can then be applied to a local WireGuard interface, e.g. `wg0`, to give it access to the cluster with the help of the `kgctl` tool:
 
 
 ```shell
 ```shell
 kgctl showconf peer squat > peer.ini
 kgctl showconf peer squat > peer.ini